I Love You Like A Love Song

I Love You Like A Love Song

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by the Love You Like A Love Song by Selena Gomez.

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I love you like love song baby
I love you like a song on replay,
Our love is only temporary
Because you ended the song,
I remember when we use to walk hand in hand
When you use to hold me tight
And told me everything would be alright,
I remember when you made me feel special
Like the luckiest girl on earth
I love you like a love song baby
I love you like a song stuck on replay,
The lyrics to our song I'll never forget
I'm sure one day you will  regret
Ever ending our  love song
But until you realize it
You'll forever be my favorite love song...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I was listening to Selena Gomez while I was writing this. I hope you like it.

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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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i guess your poetry itself can be composed as a song..it`s so beautifull as always

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem made me smile...:)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good write, love the flow and the lyrical nature of it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely poem, lost love and regret, you are a romantic, lol....nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite lovely - thank you for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a really sweet and adorable poem. I love the simile...it made me smile....because it made me think about all the ex's I've had too..and my recent one the most. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really sweet and lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. The emotion of love is the best days of a life. Sometime we may cry and sometime we may swim in happiness. Thank you for a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you rhyme it really well...i think there is a bit of nostalgia in it...but you wrote it pretty well!
lovely one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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