Closer

2 people coming together again.

In the past we use to be close,

We could talk about anything

And everything,

Our secrets were always safe

Then one day we hit a wall

We began fighting all the time,

It was something we never did

We stopped talking 

And ignored each other,

Spending holidays together were a thing of the past

But now five years later

We're closer than ever

Finally brought back into each other's lives

By heartache, but at least we get to reconcile

At least we get the chance to do that

Because most people don't even get to say "I'm sorry"

And now we're closer than ever...

And a wedge will never develop again..

Author's Note

This is one of the four poems I have to write for the mural. This one is about family and togetherness. Please give your honest reviews.

Reviews

[blakjassy]

So many people will relate to the sentiments expressed in this poem! Often is is a moment of heartache that bring estranged friends and family back together, allowing them to see that life is too short and time is too precious to allow fractions to form and keep them apart!

Most people dont get to say sorry because they either miss or refuse to see the opportunities to do so!

I say live with no regrets!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very heartfelt, and so wonderful that friendship prevailed. Loved it.

[Day Dreamer]

I truly love this poem. Very heartfelt, emotionally, and well written. Keep writing! :)

[Linear]

In the past we useD to be close

How lovely is this, I just love happy endings and you are right so many don't get the chance to say sorry :0)

[TheElfPrincess]

Relatable and beautiful, like the flow and structure. Well written.

[Max]

awws it's so like real, it reminds me of something but I don't know what. anywho.. I loved it great job!

[MS. BABy]

this is nice I enjoyed the coming of the worlds to one place. We each live in our own orb and to share that is an art and sometimes we don't but when we combine and collide properly .....we get cohesion...beautiful piece lady..

[Lily Mae]

I've heard it be said that when we are broken and heal ...we then our stronger then before the break... xo Excellent write T~

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sweet and lovely that everyone can relate to!