Light Shines Through

Light Shines Through

A Poem by Tasha
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I think everyone has good in them.

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Everyone has good in them,
But its up to them to find it
Within themselves
No matter who you are
Or where you come from,
Light shines through
Even in darkness
When everyone else sees 
The beast in you,
There's a speck of light
Desperately trying to be seen
So everyone can see you for
Who you are
So everyone can see the real you
When light shines through

© 2011 Tasha


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Some people are afraid to show kindness and be brave and to test life. Heart brake and pain can block the doors to life and love. I like the desire in this poem. Your words are true. Most people have kindness and love to share. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Its filled with such beauty& delight!
Keep on writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really nice poem and I love how you used yellow for the word light and black for the darkness... simply amazing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

o true true

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! The way you did it in blue then yellow each time you said light and black when you said darkness fit in well with the structure. It's true everyone has good in them no matter how deep down. I love the point of this poem. Amazing write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people are afraid to show kindness and be brave and to test life. Heart brake and pain can block the doors to life and love. I like the desire in this poem. Your words are true. Most people have kindness and love to share. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Terrific words of wisdom!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely right. We must see our own goodness. Excellent poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was gnarly and I felt like it was naive. I really do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how you used the colors. It gave a certain feeling to the poem. I loved this, it was a good flowing poem. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellant!! Probably one of my favorites by you!!! Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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