Music Within

You don't always need music.

As we glide across the floor

It's as if no one is watching,

Like the only people in the room

Are you and me,

There is no music in the background

Because our  love makes its own beat

One that can't be produced,

Its passion between the two of us

No one else will dare try to repeat

As we glide across the floor

And look into each other's eyes

There's a note in my heart from you

That no other has ever left before

Reviews

[FallenWingz]

This poem reminds me of my late gf....we both loved music so much, we started writing & composed lyrics togeda...
"Its passion between the two of us
No one else will dare try to repeat" this is how i wud rememeber her, it wud only be btwn the 2 of us.

[brenda]

sweet really beautiful love it !:)

[Call Me Blu]

I love the way that this tells such ana amazing story yet flows and rhymes perfectly. The image it creates is warm and private, like we weren't meant to see it and we should feel privliged. Great job and you have even inspired me a bit! :D

[Buddhistboy73]

This is written in such an innocent, sweet style that I can;'t help but like the words....and I really felt the emotion in the last two lines....great write! Thanks for sharing.....

[guiltyascharged]

Oh, very beautiful and touching. A love only two can feel can make the music of their hearts, very understandable.

[biggerthenu]

very touching this is a marvelous write

[jimmy]

beautiful

[Fire Tulip]

I'm not very good at poetry (okay fine, I'm horrible) but I can defineately tell this is a masterpiece. It made me think of someone special.

[Kiri Nells]

I always love how your poems are beautiful in a sweet, innocent-yet-not-really-innocent way. I don't quite know how I'm supposed to describe your style.
Wonderful write :)

[nevermindfan1991]

Aah....another beautiful poem. But I'm elated that it is about music. Music is what drives my soul, keeps me sane, and uplifts my imagination. This poem was able to conflate both music and love into something beautiful and true. This was very intriguing read. Great job!