Music Within

You don't always need music.

As we glide across the floor

It's as if no one is watching,

Like the only people in the room

Are you and me,

There is no music in the background

Because our  love makes its own beat

One that can't be produced,

Its passion between the two of us

No one else will dare try to repeat

As we glide across the floor

And look into each other's eyes

There's a note in my heart from you

That no other has ever left before

Reviews

[FallenWingz]

This poem reminds me of my late gf....we both loved music so much, we started writing & composed lyrics togeda...
"Its passion between the two of us
No one else will dare try to repeat" this is how i wud rememeber her, it wud only be btwn the 2 of us.

[yashsickle]

"Because our love makes its own beat"
I loved all of it but this is the only line that I would consider revising. It seems a tad bit cliche. But it's very smooth and really carries the love of this dancing couple to our minds and hearts.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. When two people are dancing. The music can free them from the world. I like the emotion and the description in this poem. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sweet and soft!

[Gilbert Saint]

I like the flow, the seamless 'music' in the background, yes, love does make people do crazy things, even dance to imaginary music. Great and short, precise and concise poetry.

[Day Dreamer]

Keep writing! :) (I loved it)

[dora]

sweet

[Black]

keep on writing is all i can say
its really nice!

[Marie Harrison]

So romantic!
Your poem swept me off my feet.

[Cherrie Palmer]

bravo! this was sweet, smooth and revealing

[prodicallife]

butifull loved it...