Music Within

You don't always need music.

As we glide across the floor

It's as if no one is watching,

Like the only people in the room

Are you and me,

There is no music in the background

Because our  love makes its own beat

One that can't be produced,

Its passion between the two of us

No one else will dare try to repeat

As we glide across the floor

And look into each other's eyes

There's a note in my heart from you

That no other has ever left before

Reviews

[FallenWingz]

This poem reminds me of my late gf....we both loved music so much, we started writing & composed lyrics togeda...
"Its passion between the two of us
No one else will dare try to repeat" this is how i wud rememeber her, it wud only be btwn the 2 of us.

[Chantel]

Amazing, I really like this; you are super-talented, keep it up! :)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Music is the love both souls create to form the unity. I love this poem for that message that you speak.

[Mashairi]

Your love poem are amazing. Well done :D

[BeccaB]

its realy plesant to read and a great job done nice poem ^_^

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job!

[J.]

Its beautiful, though the color of the text is irritating. You seemed to have two accidental rhymes in a free verse piece of poetry. I thought there would have been a little more symbolism with music based on the title, but you really on have music in the piece once. Maybe it could be retitled it to something that is more like a dance than music because you mention "gliding across the floor" a couple of times. Those lines have more to do with dancing than music.

[Joseph D. Smith]

Awww! That is so sweet! I love how the love makes it's own beat, and it is true, as the heart beats to true love. The heart pumps blood, which then makes it's own adrenaline.

Keep up the wonderful work!

[Andrea Vargas]

interesting (:

[freelancejouster]

this is so sweet and beautiful, wonderful wording and ideas behind it... if i were to be picky, i'd say something about punctuation at the end of each phrase or thought, to make it flow better.

[Mariah Jane]

... I dont know quit what to say. This reminds me of a book I was reading called Rhapsody. Very good...and I mean your poem ;) The book is good, too, though. I love this very much. There is something to be said for music.