Wipe Away

Wipe Away

A Poem by Tasha
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Life would be easier if you could wipe away things you don't like.

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Wipe away my tear stained face,
The fear in my eyes when I look at you

Wipe away the pain in my heart
So the damage that has been done can subside

Wipe away the confusion in my mind
For ever doubting you

Putting all my insecurities on a windshield
While the wipers wipe them away

Its a thought that isn't needed,
It was just to drive me crazy

And it worked because I just want to take life's struggles
And wipe them away 
From my mind,
Body,
And spirit

♥♥♥

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Dreamed about this earlier hope you like it.
Honest reviews please.

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I wish I had a giant winsheild whiper that I put into my ear and hear it wipeing away all the pain and anguish and hurt and hate and all the rest of the feelings and emotions that bring me down... Very well said and a good dream to have, kinda felt as if I was in it in this read...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This poem is truly heartfelt

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this piece...I could feel it coming from your heart when I read it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an excellent write and your heart and thoughts pour out on the screen.. Your dream was well dreamn't :) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You dreamed a dream and held it well, to wash away tears, pain aswell
Now that's a wipe out. Well done :0)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work..!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have read your work in the short time I have been a part of this site, and it has improved so much! You have developed both in skill and reaching out to your readers and this is excellent proof of it. Deep, vivid and emotional. Simply beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this write, some of my best works are the product of dreaming, after all that is what us poets do right? You are good at what you do, dreaming and writing. don't ever stop.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like how u set this one up and its being wiped away :)
I wish i had poems come to me in my dreams :(
nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The best work for a poem is one that is honest; this is just that. Dreams that stay with you are always wonderful for things like this. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing poem. I love the headline as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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