Wipe Away

Life would be easier if you could wipe away things you don't like.

Wipe away my tear stained face,

The fear in my eyes when I look at you

Wipe away the pain in my heart

So the damage that has been done can subside

Wipe away the confusion in my mind

For ever doubting you

Putting all my insecurities on a windshield

While the wipers wipe them away

Its a thought that isn't needed,

It was just to drive me crazy

And it worked because I just want to take life's struggles

And wipe them away 

From my mind,

Body,

And spirit

♥♥♥

Author's Note

Dreamed about this earlier hope you like it.
Honest reviews please.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I wish I had a giant winsheild whiper that I put into my ear and hear it wipeing away all the pain and anguish and hurt and hate and all the rest of the feelings and emotions that bring me down... Very well said and a good dream to have, kinda felt as if I was in it in this read...

[Just Cat]

Oh this is so relatable. I'm sure this is a very universal theme!
I like the style, the wording. It's simple and heartfelt, and I like it.
Good work! :)

[Elle M.]

very very good

[guiltyascharged]

Very good! Do you mind if I use your words in my own poem? I'm gonna say you inspired it.

[amdc101]

I do like it. I wish life really was like this.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is cool, honestly. You are a true talent.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is beautiful

[Fire Tulip]

Oh my god. This is exactly how I feel! I just never put it into words. To be honest, I LOVE this piece!

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very compelling in the way you write. And you make it look effortless, the struggle you take to become free of it all.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very touching write. I enjoyed reading it. makes one think.

[Judy Ponceby]

A very nice write. I like how the first 3 stanzas start the same, giving the feeling of wipers on a windshield moving back and forth. The first line of the 4th stanza doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem. Perhaps rewording, as your intent is well thought out. i do like the second line of that stanza very much though. I like the offset lines at the end as well. Well done. :)