Wipe Away

Life would be easier if you could wipe away things you don't like.

Wipe away my tear stained face,

The fear in my eyes when I look at you

Wipe away the pain in my heart

So the damage that has been done can subside

Wipe away the confusion in my mind

For ever doubting you

Putting all my insecurities on a windshield

While the wipers wipe them away

Its a thought that isn't needed,

It was just to drive me crazy

And it worked because I just want to take life's struggles

And wipe them away 

From my mind,

Body,

And spirit

♥♥♥

Author's Note

Dreamed about this earlier hope you like it.
Honest reviews please.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I wish I had a giant winsheild whiper that I put into my ear and hear it wipeing away all the pain and anguish and hurt and hate and all the rest of the feelings and emotions that bring me down... Very well said and a good dream to have, kinda felt as if I was in it in this read...

[AndyJCash]

Nice idea and a pretty well set out structure, good job :)

[Darkest Rose]

I adore this poem! It can relate to people so much and I wish I could do that as I have made a good few mistakes in my life.It flows really well and fits together.Keep up the amazing writing :)

[Princess LouLou]

Short and sweet. - Loved it.

[Raspberry Rebel]

In some ways, yes life would be easier if we could wipe away what we don't like...But without all the trials and not so pleasant things in my life I wouldn't be who I am today...
Life isn't meant to be a bed of roses, it's a journey with many a twist and turn...some enjoyable, some not so.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I loved you wiping away your indecision about where a relationship is going, like wiping bugs off a windshield. Either it is or it isn't, if you know what I mean. Sometimes, things happen that are better left forgotten. I liked your poem. You're not speaking up giving up, but going on!

[Midori]

I thought is was vary well written. I can totally tell you put your heart into writing this poem.

[Robert Kahil]

Plenty of things in this world need to be wiped away. The actual flow blending with the touching words provide a great basis. First two stanzas, great at dragging the attention through to me. Write on.

[Carrion.]

this has deep meaning. I really enjoyed reading it, I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this.
Great read. I look forward to reading more:D

[obvious pseudonym]

this is great like forgiva and forget. just wipe it away. i wish i could do that sometimes. some memories you just don't want