Excuse Me

Excuse Me

A Poem by Tasha
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My rant

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I'm sorry I don't have time
To review everything you do,
But lets face it,
What do you review?
I have other things to do
And if you can't understand it
Then forget you,
If your going to delete me
Or block me
What's the point of being friends?
Excuse me for having a life,
I am young remember
Excuse me for not falling 
Head over heels for everything you do
The whole universe doesn't 
Revolve around you,
There are more people on here 
Willing to become my friend
And like I said before
FORGET YOU!!

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I'm tired of people deleting and blocking me when I didn't do anything to them. Ugggghhh!!

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I really like this poem! Nice job! I love how the feelings are shown so well. And gosh... people deleted you/blocked when you didn't do anything? XD Awwww. People can be so stupid. lol. But yes, even with those type of people, YOU've always GOT your real friends supporting you all the way! Keep on doing what you do. Yes, we're all busy sometimes so its okay.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This made me laugh a bit. It also reminds me of the song "Forget you" xD. Anyways, I like how something like deleting and blocking can make such an enjoyable poem: both structurally and contextually. Have you ever tried writing satire? I feel like you would be really good at that. Anyway, thanks for sharing this! Kudos to you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this poem because this is what people do to you all you life. You will be giving this poem to others constantly. One thing you can consider, sometimes people delete and block you only because their lives have gotten in the way and they can not do what they used to do with reading and reviewing. As hard as it may be "don't take it personal". Life is hard and time is short. Life changes just some times get in the way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem! Nice job! I love how the feelings are shown so well. And gosh... people deleted you/blocked when you didn't do anything? XD Awwww. People can be so stupid. lol. But yes, even with those type of people, YOU've always GOT your real friends supporting you all the way! Keep on doing what you do. Yes, we're all busy sometimes so its okay.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's very comprehensible...We have a lot of things to do and it is sometimes impossible for us to review all the read requests...Nothing to worry, if they delete you, just forget it, you can still find other awesome friends here...Chill... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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