Begging On Your Knees For Me

Even the player gets played even once and a while.

You think you're something

Because you had my mind

And my heart

But I've got something that

Will make you 

Drop to your knees

You think you can get away

With hurting me

And every girl in between

Well think again!

You've had your fun

But now its time for 

Us to join in the laugh

As we make you

Drop to your knees

And beg for forgiveness

You say you're sorry,

But you're only sorry 

You got caught

Caught in the lies,

Caught in the game

The player finally gets 

Played 

And now your finding your way back

Like a lost bird all alone,

You can find someone else to fool

Because I'm done with you

As I watch you begging on your knees for me

Author's Note

Based on the episode of Victorious.

Reviews

[Chris]

Ta'Sha,

Would be better if based on reality for someone...

Drama is written to be - dramatic. Its coldly calculated and if NOT transparent enough - it gets re-written. So false emo - heightened and polished to a def right/wrong so the viewers "Get IT" and then buy a sponsor's products.

Life on the other hand is NOT dramatic by choice - just event. With luck and wisdom we seldom have re-runs.

Chris

[Krystal Nicole]

Awesome!! Very well writtn and such a great poem. nice flow and everything. .

[Call Me Blu]

Caught in the lies,
Caught in the game
The player finally gets
Played
Omg best line ever :D I love this poem!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Solid, simply that.

[Angelic_Dreamer]

That's surely a great poem.Keep writing great poems cuz this one ruled!

[ClockWork GRIMM]

I'm a real stickler for originality... but considering the ideas at play here... I really enjoyed it honestly. The only thing I'd like to see is you using truly imaginative and original phrasing... But all else considered.. This is great.

[Marie Harrison]

You told him!

[Jeremy Baker]

They say revenge is sweet ... and so it is!

[Hawee]

I actually haven't seen the show, but that was a good poem ! :)

[Joshua Donahue]

My little sister loves that show! And I am not sure if I have seen this particular episode, but from a writing standpoint, this was pretty good. A little sassy and revengeful, which made it good. I enjoyed this!

[Fire Tulip]

Awesome piwce of work! When I read it, it kind of seemed like a song in my head.