You're The Inspiration

dedicated to an amazing friend

You make me smile,

You make me laugh,

Your the inspiration

To never give up

You give me advice 

When I need it the most,

And say Life's like a bull

That you need to grab by the horns

And take control of

Your the inspiration

To keep moving forward

To keep pressing on

No matter what others say,

Because there's only one person

You need to answer to

And that's yourself

We may not have known each other long

But you've turned out to be

The most amazing friend I have,

And I'm so thankful  for you

I don't know what I'd do 

Without you

Author's Note

This is for biggerthenu, thank you so much for being who you are! <3

Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I really, really feel this poem! It's, often, rare to have someone touch our lives in a way that makes us grow, inspires us to be our best, and encourages us to excell. Your writing, here, seems to exceed the wisdom of your years concerning your understanding of the powerful friendship you seem to have with biggerthenu. You will find, as you go through life, that sometimes only a moment shared with a passing stranger can change you forever. Impressive writing!!

[Chris]

Ta'sha,

Well said. Minor tech glitch - 3rd stanza - "Your the inspiration":

Your = Possession
You're = Contraction of 'you are'

Chris

[Richard Williams]

Direct and uplifting.

[LadyNaida]

Aw, this is so beautiful We all need someone kind of inspiration in your lives and a friend is always the perfect one to have.

[realmwriter]

This is very Good and it inspires me to write about something along these lines. Thank You for the request, I loved it...

[Daytonight]

Wow! What a wonderful poem you have dedicated to your friend. It speaks volumes! Keep up the great work!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A good tribute, you may want to take a look at the use of that first word on your third stanza, other than that, basically a good piece that speaks of your admiration.

[DC Gentleman]

gorgeous.. its good to tell people they are appreciate while they are here to savor the compliment..

great write!

Ver good poem. You relayed your feelings quite well.

[RedInk524]

A true friend is a sibling.

[Rene Velez]

cool scribe Ta'shandra, nice Ode to a friend...