Toxic Love

School time 8th grade word of the day: toxic.

It started with you holding my hand,

Then kissing and touching

Then the real you came out,

The yelling, the screaming

Whatever happened  to love?

Whatever happened  to forever and always?

Toxic, toxic is what you are,

Toxic poison is what you caused in this relationship

Deathly stares,

Deathly threats,

Its time to leave

And find a new medicine

One that doesn't stab at my heart 

Reviews

[Christie Moses]

Toxic is a great word for it. If the relationship you are in doesn't make you feel better about yourself and make you a better person because of it, causing instead, the upset and pain of feeling worse, it is definitely time to move on. Many will relate to this.
Well said!

[SpokenWord]

It is time and yes new medicine can help. Knowing it, seeing it is important but doing it is the key. Lovely write.

[?]

Nice one, emotions are screaming

[Priyanka Natesh]

Good one! Thank you :)

[Jeremy Baker]

A very pertinent message - good write!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh how I relate to this one. It was as if you were in my head. Very well penned. You delivered a lot in just a few sentences. Very nice.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great shot..!!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The sense of toxic love, is portrayed here so well, love it :)

[Safe&sound<3 ♫]

i like this! you really displayed the emotions well(: you didnt have to paint a picture; you let us see it.

[stars are far]

this is really nice and if it was real hurting ..
good job :)