Watching Her

She should have turned away

She feels your presence on her

She slowly turns to find you

Watching her...

She quickly turns away,

Back to the party

But ponders the thought

Of why you're watching her

Its because of her smile

The way she carry's herself

You'd love to find someone like her,

Which is why your watching her..

To find out what she's like

Her favorite things...

Watching her

So you know when to make a move

When she's all alone

To go for the kill

Because girls like her

Are so easy to manipulate,

To make her think he wants her,

But he just wants her blood

To use as a shield 

Against all odds 

Because the princess's blood

Is what he needs...

To break the curse 

Author's Note

Different ending than I expected.
7/16/2011

Reviews

[Safe&sound<3 ♫]

i like it(:

[Barbara Lynne]

hmm...very different...nicely don

[Aidz]

Im liking the way yr experimenting with yr writes , helps you grow and its seen in yr words :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

Very well penned. The ending changed the feel of the poem entirely. Very nice flow as well, gave it the feel of a predator stalking its prey...

[Daniel88Batson]

Nice piece. Twilight fan perhaps? =D

[GawjusGirl]

:))

[STAR CHILD]

wow what a frightful journey baby sitter

[amdc101]

Huh. Not what I expected either, but nice write :)

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the twist. Feels real.

[Hello, Goodbye]

curiously interesting..