Between You And Me

Between You and me

Things have changed

There not at all

Like they use to be

Its crazy now

Because we both said

That we would not change

But look at us now,

There's so much space

Between you and me

Our  world is not what its

Suppose to be...

And neither are us,

Look at all this space

Between you and me

Its not the way lovers

Should be..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can change directions. Some people will leave and some will stay. Need to be thankful for the people who will stay with us. I like how you told the story in the poem. I like how you ended the poem. Sort of a question needing to be answered. Thank your for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aaron M. Anderson]

Very true to life, sometimes. Thanks for sharing this emotional piece!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe I loved this write...it was cute, but painful...relationships do that after a while...and it's hard on both of you...and love the feeling within the poem...you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

[deeps]

I can reaaly feel this write, I like this and can
connect on some levels. This is a most wonderful
feelingful write Ta'Shandra.

[Michael of Gilead]

it's an old story, written countless times across the ages and never more true than here

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very poetic and flow is awesome makes a pleasure to read :)