Between You And Me

Between You and me

Things have changed

There not at all

Like they use to be

Its crazy now

Because we both said

That we would not change

But look at us now,

There's so much space

Between you and me

Our  world is not what its

Suppose to be...

And neither are us,

Look at all this space

Between you and me

Its not the way lovers

Should be..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can change directions. Some people will leave and some will stay. Need to be thankful for the people who will stay with us. I like how you told the story in the poem. I like how you ended the poem. Sort of a question needing to be answered. Thank your for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[donny ingraham]

Excellent write,love is not fair nor is there a guarantee the ones you give your heart to will return the favor.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice lyrical quality here. Keep the love alive!

[Canicus]

yeah, I hate when you like someone and then you get together and things change after awhile. good write keep it up.

[DONALD EISSLER]

sems you have captured the meaning of change good write
tk

[Wolf's Ink]

The format had me lose my rhythm for a moment towards the end but otherwise it's a pretty good message for a poem.

[brenda]

awesome !! i love the format and everything about it !!:)

[An owl on the moon]

There is always movement in life it seems.. as if one can never stand still.. and two can only get closer or drift away. Your words profoundly speak of the sadness and longing when love begins to fragment and fall apart... Powerful.

[Gilbert Saint]

Yes its not, people don't really love these days, but make yourself one of those who do. good one

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

an excellent write Ta'Shandra............and neither are we