Between You And Me

Between You and me

Things have changed

There not at all

Like they use to be

Its crazy now

Because we both said

That we would not change

But look at us now,

There's so much space

Between you and me

Our  world is not what its

Suppose to be...

And neither are us,

Look at all this space

Between you and me

Its not the way lovers

Should be..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can change directions. Some people will leave and some will stay. Need to be thankful for the people who will stay with us. I like how you told the story in the poem. I like how you ended the poem. Sort of a question needing to be answered. Thank your for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

Good portrayal of emotions here. Well written...xx

[castargirl]

omg that was soooo good i loved it!

[Kat Collins]

Nice emotion and feeling in this poem. You capture the distance well. Watch the grammar/spelling....overall, nice one!

[Lee Gupperton]

I love it. You captured a situation a lot of us can relate to and wrote it out beautifully. Well done

[light and ashes]

A heartfelt, sencere, and beautiful poem

[Khaaki]

beautiful poem... Very truthful n touching...

[lostboy]

change happens ,in our environment,our opinion,and our heart..our soul must sometimes work to keep up. all things ..true ..will last.

[lovejulez03]

Other then the grammar/spelling errors I like the direction that you are going with this. Sorry it took so long to do my review! I think that we can all relate and it was very heart felt :) Nice piece

[stars are far]

yea that is so right
i loved this poem :)

[Andrew Wright]

Move with the tide or against it... Lovers move as one or fail... A wonderful, emotional piece.