The Library

The Library

A Poem by Tasha
"

Why can't everyone be accepted?

"
He walks down the hall in shame,
with his head held down
cursing himself
for living in such a small town
wishing for the name calling
and harassment to cease
because its killing him inside
He reaches the library 
and eats his lunch in silence
while becoming lost in a book..
his only escape;
The bell rings and its time
to go back to class:
back to the name calling,
back to the taunting,
back to the hell...
during school hours
The class project involves partners,
the entire class shuns him out
just because of his mom's preference,
he runs to the library and bawls his eyes out..
Finally the day is over
and he walks to his car to find
its been trashed,
he goes back into the library
and pulls out a piece of paper
and his favorite book
and he begins writing..
writing this letter and wishing
he could just be normal..
He puts the book 
back in its place when a librarian
says to him
"I know how you feel."
she pulls the letter out of the
book and rip it apart
he finally felt accepted
when the whole world
turned their back on him

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
2nd narrative poem about a guy being shunned by everyone.

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Yeah, it does suck when you feel that you're the only bookworm around. It's annoying when you can't belong with any group is that all you have are books. In a sense, those book nerds can be annoying to be around because all his/her world is just books.

When the 80 year old librarian is your only company, it's like... uh... there's a personal problem here. Sometimes, it takes some courage. Anyway, I know the feeling of being shoved aside for sometime in my childhood.

Anyway, great write. :)

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A wonderfully written poem of a tragic life occurance. You penned it beautifully. Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I felt so bad for the guy in this, poor guy, bless him. It made me want to pull up a chair beside him and tell him that he's not alone.
I can relate though, sadly, I still get called a bookworm even now.
A great write though, I like the hopeful ending.
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is so sad. I love the way you wrote it though, wonderful job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is very, very interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This hit me so hard, this reminds of myself. I still feel that, I still feel shunned by everyone, I still feel abnormal at times. This was great poem, you really expressed the sadness that this boy was feeling. Your poems really hit the gut and at the same times the heart strings. A wonderful piece of work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was really sad. It hurt to read. I felt terrible for this boy. I hate school. People are so cruel. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I liked it. . I think you did a great job at telling the guy's story through the poem. . It was flawless. 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


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High school sucks but I think that it's good to be different because being like everyone else is boring !! But a intriguing piece and totally relatable everyone at some point in their lives wants to feel accepted and I guess in the end the persona gets what he wants. I think though that the structure of the poem was fine and word choice as well the reader was pulled into this piece it was very enjoyable so well done ! :) Keep writing !!

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i find myself wondering if i want to be the subject matter in spite of the differences. i'm sitting here reading when i know i'm not a qualified reader and realize i have to let go of something in order to move ahead. then again, isn't that what you are writing about? if that's the case, thanks.

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