Painting A Picture

Do I still want to be apart of the picture?

Everything has to go your way,

Either your way or the highway...

You paint a picture

To make me look like the bad guy,

Its you that's the fake

Always lying to get what you want

But someone will see through that paint,

Because you're just like watercolor...

See through

Always having to add extra coats

To cover up your lies...

You're painting a picture

But I'm not apart of it anymore....

Author's Note

By the way I like watercolor.. its just something I thought of.

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

Amazing poem! I really enjoyed reading this one. I liked how you used the word painting to describe the constant lies this person spewed to make you look bad, and to describe his charlatan ways. Very touchy subject and it was described beautifully. You never cease to amaze me with your writing.

[donny ingraham]

Amazing and yet strong and defensive. I love it

[Tasha]

@biggerthenu thank you!

[Sabrina Demartini]

wonderful, i enjoyed reading this

[biggerthenu]

GREAT JOB I LIKE HOW YOU DID THIS ONE AND TOOK UR SELF OUT THE PAINTING AWESOME

[Hello, Goodbye]

another great compact poem

[nevershoutnever.]

That was beautiful. Keep at it!

[Maggie]

Maybe it's because you deserve to be in a better picture. Rock it out and paint it loud and proud:D

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I liked this! I enjoyed your "experimentation" with the colors, and references to art. You wrote with strong emotion...very nice = ]

[Krystal Nicole]

Awesome job!! I LOVED it! The feeling and emmotion mixed with the great arrangement is beautiful. Great work

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very expressive of not allowing someone to control another. Excellent Poem. Beautifully penned.