Fingerprints

Where will my fingerprints end up?

Fingerprints all over the walls,

different colors,

different styles

each a symbol of my personality,

a feeling of their own

my signature..

my mark on the world,

my way to show who I am

an imprint that will leave you wondering

prints that will never be forgotten...

Reviews

[Kathryn]

Have you ever read the poem 'Pawprints'? Its like a teddy bear version of this one, but somehow I prefer this more grown-up version. We leave prints wherever we go physically (just did a day of forensics so I know all about that xD) but there are some fingerprints that we leave on people's souls themselves. Great job, Well done :)

[lovejulez03]

I really loved this piece! So much of your work is simple and to the point and this poem is, once again, simple and to the point. You made your point and you did it beautifully and gently. Thanks for sharing, this is one of my favorites from you. I think we all need to evaluate how we want to leave our mark on society, friends, and family.

[lovely-livia]

i love this! it makes u question what have i done to help!

[Enjoy]

I never really considered the fingerprint a `signature.`
Until now, I suppose. I'd always thought of it as a cold, calculated forensic parameter. This is a much, much nicer view of it.
Well done. I also like that you're using a little bit of formatting to add some variety to it. Nice.

Beautiful. Love it.

[Stormy Weather]

Beautifully written poem.

[Winslow Des Totes]

This is very cool, I like the use of color and the way it expresses certain feelings. Awesome write! :D

[Daytonight]

I really like this. The form is lovely and so very expressive. Well done! Keep on penning.!

[Lively]

Very well written, small but effective.

[biggerthenu]

I LIKE IT YOU HAVE TO EXPRESS YOUR SELF AND U DO IT WELL THANKS FOR THE INSIGHT I WAS A LITTLE LOST I'LL I READ WHERE WILL MY FINGERPRINTS END UP!!!