Did I Ruin Everything

What did I do to you?
I thought this was a
Two-way street
I never did anything
I just spoke my mind,


Did I ruin everything
When I complemented you
Or when I said
You're different than most
What am I suppose to do cause baby its the truth
Forget about you
And the things you do
Did I ruin everything


When I said I have feelings for you
But its you, you're the one
To string me along
When you liked someone else
Leaving me to be lost
In the pact
In a race that goes on for miles
Did I ruin everything


With myself
Believing in you,
Did I ruin everything
When I listened to you

But its you that ruined everything

Author's Note

Old feelings I had. What did you think?

Reviews

[Helpless]

sometimes i feel like a i ruin everyone else's life by being in it.... not mine, but theres. so in a way i know how you feel. but a friend of mine made me realize that we really shouldn't blame ourselves for everything, cause not everything is our fault.

[Hidden_identity]

Lovely poem. A lot of people blame themselves for things and it turns out, they didn't do anything wrong.

[Crimson Goddess]

You did nothing wrong, you were just yourself, no one could ask anything else. If anyone thinks otherwise, well they are just stupid. Don't blame yourself for others stupidity.

[Calypso]

When relationships go bad I remember one thing, it takes two to tango. SO while you may feel at fault I'm sure your ex was at fault too.

[alternative_be]

These old feeling of yours are eternal and of the kind that anyone can relate to when a relationship comes to an end. Sometimes we feel like we have ruined everything, while we have done nothing wrong.
There are 2 persons in a relationship, don't ever feel guilty for things that you are not responsible for.
Try to remember the good times, get rid of the bad feelings. Writing poetry is an excellent way!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Really great, revealing piece. Good work. :)

[Berto]

It is liberating to express old emotions. Once they've been placed on the page, they're no longer within us to torment us with their pettiness. It's lovely how you've released this old demon.

[Kathryn]

Sometimes I fear that I can do naught right - if I smile, it was the wrong time, if I offer comfort I make things worse, and if I try to help I destroy whatever there was left to save. I can really relate to this, and the last line really packs a punch. Well written, well done :)

Nice write, very strong feelings.
There is one part that needs to be fixed.
"What am I suppose to do cause baby its the truth"
Supposed instead of suppose, and maybe cut the line in half, turning it into two instead of one. That line is longer than the rest so it kind of takes you out of the rhythm of the piece.
Apart from that, its a great piece. I hope I helped ^.^

[unknown]

I know the feeling very well....enjoyed this one.