My Secret Lover

Can you guess my lover?

A secret love
that's soon discovered
all because of the things
you do to me

You caress my legs
and let out a sweet
whisper in my ears

You wrap yourself
around me
and never let go

You hold me close
because you don't want
anyone to know
that you are my
secret lover...

I love how you've
kept your cover,
but not for long
you cute little kitty
you...

Charcoal  <3

Author's Note

Pyrokitty24 gave me the idea about a cat and this is about our neighborhood cat Charcoal. This is Charcoal in the picture.

Reviews

[temoralez]

Thoughts: I'd guess you are the lover, but interestingly I get the impression the point of view shifts from Charcoal to you. In the first 4 stanzas, it all sounds like Charcoal's point of view, but in the last few lines of the 5th stanza I get the feeling that it's from your point of view. I like this one especially since it's your interpretation of someone else's point of view.

Constructive Criticism: None, I liked the poem so much that there wasn't anything I could find to critic on it. The mystery of who is the lover draws my interest.

[FallenWingz]

only when i got to the last line i saw its a cat, wow, i really loved the metaphors and flow...truly imagineable..

[DRD]

It's wonderful it expresses emotion and it flows wonderfully. It was a great read.

[Alicia Hirshey]

At first i didn't know how to take this. But it was adorable, and so was the picture.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Awe! This is absolutely adorable!!! I love it, specially because I absolutely love kitties anyways!! :) I'll post a pic up of my kitty!

[Ashli The Amazing]

aww how cute! [: hehe very nice ^_^

[alerodri]

so cute, apreciate all living creature , i guess uor are against fur right?

[unknown]

Love it, the title makes you think something different

[The fallen of innocence]

omg, super cute and how i love cats, if only i had one

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw, how cute, I love cats.