The Edge

I'm on the edge

with you

hanging on by a thread

trying to keep what we had..

I'm slipping..

catch me..

hold me..

I don't want to loose you

we're about to fall

I hate being on the edge

with you

because you let us fall apart

Author's Note

I hope you like it.

Reviews

[kymee]

nice poem. I've been on the edge too and that is quite uncomfortable.Did you both let it fall apart?you were doing all the work in the beginning of the poem. your choice was to get out or get off instead you both let it go. Could be expanded a bit, but necessary, thanks for letting me read your poem and stay off that edge

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice, very simple, very much to the point.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow... I really love this poem....
I hope everything's gonna be okay.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Helpless]

i hate that sometimes in life there is no one to hold us when we cry or catch us when we fall. awesome poem though

[Victoria Scott]

I liked it!!!! good job :)

[Calypso]

I love how the font is distant from each other. It works well with the topic of the poem. Great write

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong short poem. I like how you held the poem together. Allowing the reader to feel the emotion of the person needing to be saved and held. A surprise ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[~ Moonlight ~]

'I hope you like it.' It should be, I LOVED IT! Ta'Shandra, you did brill, so short butnso good! :D

[Daytonight]

I really like this. Well done. I can relate to it. Keep on penning.d