The Edge

I'm on the edge

with you

hanging on by a thread

trying to keep what we had..

I'm slipping..

catch me..

hold me..

I don't want to loose you

we're about to fall

I hate being on the edge

with you

because you let us fall apart

Author's Note

I hope you like it.

Reviews

[kymee]

nice poem. I've been on the edge too and that is quite uncomfortable.Did you both let it fall apart?you were doing all the work in the beginning of the poem. your choice was to get out or get off instead you both let it go. Could be expanded a bit, but necessary, thanks for letting me read your poem and stay off that edge

[VelvetRosetta]

I did like this, Being on the edge is not good, but the plea is loud and clear.

[Joseph D. Smith]

I really love it! I just hopped from one line to the other, you had my attention all the way through. It does sort of have something missing, the right feeling. It appears to drop off at the end.

Great job on this one!

[Lily Mae]

I love this..a beauty..xx

[kevluvtory]

Too often those we love have no concious thought as to what they do to us

[Krystal Nicole]

I likeit. Great arrangement and flow!! Breat ob!

[Ashli The Amazing]

so much said in such little words [: i loved it

[biggerthenu]

Sweet straight to the point I like

[ivizarx]

very sweet poetry here, I definitely like it. the phrases ring like lyrics and send music to my ears. enjoyed this alot, thnks 4 the RR yo.

[Branch Isole]

One of your best pieces, for this reader.

[frozensakura]

i love it and can relate too(: thanks for sharing...