If Love Was A Currency

If love was a currency
you'd always be close to me
I would exchange every
penny I have to
express my love to you,
I wouldn't be frugal with you
I'd learn to save you
and only spend you
when I need you the most
I'd keep you in the bank
of my heart
with deposits  of hugs and kisses

Author's Note

somewhat cute.

Reviews

[Dimples87]

You're right, this is somewhat cute. I'm not trying to be hard on you or anything but your first two lines started off strong but it confused me a little when you said you'd "exchange every penny" -- I know what you mean but I wanted it to stay strong. I expected more. It could use a little more tweaking, though. I liked it, though nonetheless.

Really cute. :)