If Love Was A Currency

If love was a currency
you'd always be close to me
I would exchange every
penny I have to
express my love to you,
I wouldn't be frugal with you
I'd learn to save you
and only spend you
when I need you the most
I'd keep you in the bank
of my heart
with deposits  of hugs and kisses

Author's Note

somewhat cute.

Reviews

[Dimples87]

You're right, this is somewhat cute. I'm not trying to be hard on you or anything but your first two lines started off strong but it confused me a little when you said you'd "exchange every penny" -- I know what you mean but I wanted it to stay strong. I expected more. It could use a little more tweaking, though. I liked it, though nonetheless.

[EMF]

Bit too cute for my tastes, but technically a brilliant piece of work. It plays with imagry especially well and has real power.

[Daytonight]

What an interesting thought. If only we could keep our loved one like currency, especially as they are the treasure of our heart. Well done. Keep on penning.

[BigDaddySiddle]

hmm, interesting poem!!! good stuff and stibs!!!

[Adam Lain]

A soft, sweet poem.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is adorable.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a lovely poem - very well written!

[Victoria Scott]

soooo adorable and sweet...very very cute :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Verynice and cute!! Well written

[*Evelen*]

This is such a cute poem:) Amazing well done.

[Droll Prole]

So sweet! It is a good comparison to make, well done!