If Love Was A Currency

If Love Was A Currency

A Poem by Tasha

If love was a currency
you'd always be close to me
I would exchange every
penny I have to
express my love to you,
I wouldn't be frugal with you
I'd learn to save you
and only spend you
when I need you the most
I'd keep you in the bank
of my heart
with deposits  of hugs and kisses

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
somewhat cute.

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You're right, this is somewhat cute. I'm not trying to be hard on you or anything but your first two lines started off strong but it confused me a little when you said you'd "exchange every penny" -- I know what you mean but I wanted it to stay strong. I expected more. It could use a little more tweaking, though. I liked it, though nonetheless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Aww that is soo cute an really sweet:):) I have no idea how you came up with that idea but I like it:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt it was you at your most savvy, a great little piece, fearless and bright, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're right, this is somewhat cute. I'm not trying to be hard on you or anything but your first two lines started off strong but it confused me a little when you said you'd "exchange every penny" -- I know what you mean but I wanted it to stay strong. I expected more. It could use a little more tweaking, though. I liked it, though nonetheless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very cute. lol, love the idea.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so original... 'If Love Was A Currency' it's so beautiful... I really love the idea of this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just beautiful and sweet for that special someone.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

super cute and lovely, i rly liked it :3

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is cute and sweet great write !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha brilliant! Well the poem overall could be improved but as it is right now is still pretty good. The idea is very interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cute. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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