Hold Me

Will you hold me?

Hold me like you use to
when I got scared

Hold me to protect me
from the dangers of the world

Hold me when I need it most,
when my heart is broken

Hold me because you are my best friend
and you never want to see me get hurt

Reviews

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Sweet words written well
À beautiful embrace poetry

[Stonewall]

Simple, honest and direct, and because of that communicates so much more. Well done.

[Lane-roe]

I really like the fact that this poem is short-it makes a big impact, and makes me feel like the desire is very honest and real. Well done! :)

[Nimbus Thread]

What a lovely sincere offering full of heart. Well done.

[Brittany W]

So short and simple and to the point, i would like to see you expand this and maybe tell a story, like why wont he hold her anymore.. i dont know i tend to ramble, but this is terrific. nice job :)

[Sam]

So short, yet sweet. A bunch of memories come back to me- I miss them. This is truly really good. :)

[Kayla :)]

awww... that's so sweet. :) can relate to this. :) really good

[Sleeping Maiden]

Love it! Short..sweet.. comforting.. =D Definately relatable!

[Alexis]

This made a few memories flood back... Oh, how I miss them.
Anyways, this was indeed short, but it was very good. I don't know if it was just me, but there also seemed to be a tone of desperation. That's what I found anyways. This poem made me feel happy and sorrowful at the same time. But you did a great job! Keep on writing. :)

[Krystal Nicole]

Short but very meaningful. I love it! Great read!