Dear Diary~Chapter 4

Chapter 4

The next morning Kristen rose early so she could go for a run to clear her head. With headphones in her ears Kristen began jogging down the street alongside other morning joggers. After running for about half an hour Kristen decided to go to the gym... that was her mistake. While walking into the gym Kristen saw Nick, her new planner showing two women the correct way to stretch. But before she could run out of the gym Nick had spotted her.

"Hey Kristen!"

"Hey Mr. Franklin." Kristen said as as cheerfully as she could.

He waited until he reached her to ask "What are you doing here?"

It was Kristen's idea to look him in the eyes and tell him exactly why she was there, but it wasn't one of her smartest ideas. She looked up at Nick who was staring at her while taking a look at his glistening muscles she nearly fainted. The sound of his voice brought her back to reality.

"Kristen?"

"Huh?" "Oh yeah, I was um running.. to you know clear my head and I saw the gym's sign."

"Oh okay, would you like to sign up?" Nick asked.

"I.. I don't know, I'll have to think about it." Kristen said nervously, but knew this would be the first and last time she would ever step foot in this gym.

"Oh okay then." Nick said somewhat disappointed." "Are you all still coming to the meeting this afternoon?"

"Yeah", Kristen was about to say more but the two women stretching regained his attention, and at the sight of that Kristen took off out of the gym.

After she got a block and a half away from the gym Kristen walked into the clothing store her and her best friend Megan built.

"What happened to you?" Megan asked.

"I went for a run." Kristen answered, she decided not to tell Megan about her encounter with Nick.

"What do you have to run about Kristen?" "Your life is picture perfect." Megan said as she greeted customers.

"I have a lot of stress you know." Kristen said defensively.

"I know girl." Megan said while laughing.

The two women worked until Kristen had to leave for her meeting.

Author's Note

DOES IT MAKE SENSE?
YOU WILL LEARN ABOUT MRS.HIGH-TOWER,MEGAN,RYAN,AND NICK IN UPCOMING CHAPTERS.
THERE WILL ALSO BE MORE DIARY ENTRIES LATER TO COME, THIS IS STILL APART OF THE SAME DAY, CHAPTER 5 IS A CONTINUATION OF THIS DAY.
I HOPE YOU ARE ENJOYING IT, THE CONFUSION COMES LATER IN THE BOOK.

I KNOW MY CHAPTERS ARE PRETTY SHORT, BUT WITH UP AND COMING CHAPTERS I PROMISE THEY WILL GET LONGER.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING... STAY TUNED!

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I enjoyed this chapter. I think I know where the story is going, but I'll have to wait and see... :) One thing I've noticed is that when one character says two sentences in a row, you're using two sets of quotation marks, when you just need one.
"What do you have to run about Kristen?" "Your life is picture perfect." Megan said as she greeted customers.
Should be "What do you have to run about, Kristen? Your life is picture perfect (COMMA, not period, here)," Megan said.

[Shep]

If part of the same day just add to the other chapter. Long length is expected when writing a novel. Unless you are writing a bed time story. Another great chapter.will read more when you have more.

[SuicidePact.]

Looking forward to reading more.

[Angel Bluestocking]

it's ok if it's long or short. wow. her reaction to Nick. wow. i'm completely hooked! i want to read more. hehe~

[alexlessah]

I cant wait to read more!

[Grace Catherine C.]

Looking forward to more.

[Sean Allen]

The story is developing well. Add more detail to bring us into the lives of the charachters. As my high school english teacher used to say... Revision, revision, revision... Come to think of it, he still says it, 50 years later!

[oops sorry (not really)]

its alright cause really long chapter r kind of annoying but it was good please keep writing xD

[Ashli The Amazing]

nicely done [: can't wait to read more!

[brenda]

ok yeah it is really perfect and i can so relate to kristen with nick !! i was just like kristen with this crush of mne i can wait to read more!:)