Web Of Insanity

I sit by the window and wait for you, but you never show up. I gave you a call to see if you're okay, but the operator says your numbers changed, none of them are now the same. What am I suppose to do daddy? You promised you'd come, but you won't even show, to me you're just a coward and a deadbeat dad. You! You manipulated me into thinking you changed, but we all know you haven't. You had my mind spinning images of us actually becoming a family, but those dreams were squashed. You made me think things would get better, but you only made things worse, now I'm left with what I hoped would be, but I now know could never be... in my web of insanity.

Reviews

[Maya Storm]

Know a person for who they really are. Find a work around. When he shows up make room for happiness when he makes the time for you.

Usually letting a person know how, wrong they are or how bad they have been, keeps them in that frame of mind and it's hard to change when it's what they see all the time. Let him know how you feel about the past and about the hurt we you are in a good place, when you can say it with a smile.

We do not have control over the actions of others, but we have control over ourselves. Ta'Shandra control your own happiness :)

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I can relate to this :/ really good short story x

[Raven Starhawk]

In a largely sad way this reminds me of myself. It speaks to me and its short content does not disappoint in terms of well thought out structure and value. It is well penned.

[Sukriti Suki]

This is so sad...it totally reaches the reader and way it is written makes it so easy to relate with. Very well written.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is enormously sad, all the more so because it is doubtless true for so many. And that you have captured it just so is in itself the reason why this is such good writing.

[WynterPhoenix]

I like this. It reminds me of the relationship I have with my own father. This is a great write.