Deleting You

We've seen each other at school,
I never knew who you were
until you added me on facebook,
you started talking,
and we haven't stopped talking
since

I thought you were different,
you came up and introduced
yourself to me in person,
you made me feel like
no other guy has made me feel,

But on the computer,
you're a completely different person
talking in ways that I can't
comprehend,
ignoring me when I want to chat,
I want to get to the bottom of this
surely you understand

I guess you don't, you only want
one thing,
and  one thing only
but I'm not ready to give that up
especially not to you,
when I hardly even  know you

So I'm deleting you
and never looking back,

You can avoid me in the halls,
and deny what you tried to do to me,
but you can't live in denial
for the rest of your life

I'm deleting you,
and better yet I'm blocking you,
and when you look my way
I'll stare you down,
so you can live in the guilt
that you tried to make me
feel for you,

You'll never become my friend again,
you selfish low life!
I can't believe I trusted you

At least I deleted you from my life
before you won "the game"...

Author's Note

This did not happen to me, I was watching a news special about guys harassing girls on facebook, its horrible but I was inspired by it to write this.

Reviews

[Crayon]

I love this write. It tells a good story, and I find that that is lacking in alot of poetry. Good for you for finding something to write a touching poem about that is unique! I like the way you tell the story throught the poem too, the wording is excellent!

[Desmund Tiny]

I love this story....... I know how it feels..... I really love it!!!! Very well written....... ^^,

[Arianna]

:) wow it told an amazing story i loved it. :)

[BrynnaW.]

I really loved this! It is in poem format so you should have called it a poem but oh well. Very well written. Good job and keep on writing!

[alternative_be]

This is a subject that should be brought into the open more often. Whether virtually or in real life there are a lot of people around that do not stop to think what they may cause in terms of harm when they play with other people's feelings!

[Time.]

Wasn't my favorite I suppose it's because I feel like its biased,
reading this yes, you blame the boy, but what about the girl?
She has a mind, she has hands... but thats another story,
Nice write, just wasn't my favorite topic.. :)

[bookworm94]

This was an amazing piece. Unfortunately, this does happen in real life a lot and it just can't be avoided.

[MS. BABy]

WOW...this is what is called a piece of POP CULTURE..I love the current events you have employed...HELLO...I"M BABy

[JCP]

Lol, strikes a chord in me on some level oddly enough. Very good.

[Jaded Mermaid]

When I reviewed before I said it wrong, anyway, this topic's kinda unique, as Crayon said, something most can appreciate considering they live it for real. You cast it in the light nicely and made a perspective from a thought.