A Broken Record

Sadness is filled into the heart of two people that fell out of love, but can't seem to put the pieces back together.

A love once
tainted,
with all
"the good hits"
is shattered
to the ground
like a
broken record,

It use to be
so strong,
the love
they had
and shared
for each other,
now  it
fell  apart,
and
fallen into
a million pieces,

A  million pieces
that grew  tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..

A broken record
that
can't
be put
back
together
to
save
what they once had,
no matter
how hard
they tried

Only pictures
and the words
to their song
prevailed...

To live on
through
the destroyed
pieces

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool piece.

[A Risen Heroine.]

It would be easier for the reader to read your poem if it wasn't split up like that, make a whole sentence instead...
it makes it better!!
Just saying..
Well.. all in all a great poem!
Keep writing and thank you for sharing this.


~A Fallen Heroine~

[Erinne S.]

Wow! I loved this! Many people can relate and I loved how you used a record to describe relationships. It makes this piece unique. Amazing job!

~Erinne

[Helpless]

this is gorgeous, your emotions are so clear, lovely thought very sad

[Ivy]

I don't really understand how this is poetic. It's more of a rant with way too many line breaks.

[Bud]

With every hit record that gets smashed, a new one is being pressed into life and existence to take it's place...
Excellent work of art!

[Time.]

OMG! I love this! This describes so many relationships in my life.. Thank you for shairing this!1 Amazing write! (: