A Broken Record

Sadness is filled into the heart of two people that fell out of love, but can't seem to put the pieces back together.

A love once
tainted,
with all
"the good hits"
is shattered
to the ground
like a
broken record,

It use to be
so strong,
the love
they had
and shared
for each other,
now  it
fell  apart,
and
fallen into
a million pieces,

A  million pieces
that grew  tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..

A broken record
that
can't
be put
back
together
to
save
what they once had,
no matter
how hard
they tried

Only pictures
and the words
to their song
prevailed...

To live on
through
the destroyed
pieces

Reviews

[Awkward]

I actually liked the way you split the poem up! Call me crazy :) It made me stop read comprehend and move on! I got to admit though it triggered my dyslexia like no other! Anyways great write!

[dreaming dame]

Nice:) like the comparison. :)

[Aleyah]

I enjoy your quirky, but wonderful comparisons to things like love & life :) Great piece :)

[Kayla :)]

I liked it. really good poem

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very well written with all sorts of sad emotions

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Really heart felt piece hung on every word and I imagined a shattered record in front of me. Great!!

[Krystal Nicole]

Very vivid words and beautifully writen. Great peiece!!

[joshua deathdealer]

A love once tainted, with all "the good hits" Awesome write.

[Axolotl1]

Beautiful piece.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Ahh, memories. Good comparison of broken relationships and broken records. You pulled this off nicely. Great write.