A Broken Record

Sadness is filled into the heart of two people that fell out of love, but can't seem to put the pieces back together.

A love once
tainted,
with all
"the good hits"
is shattered
to the ground
like a
broken record,

It use to be
so strong,
the love
they had
and shared
for each other,
now  it
fell  apart,
and
fallen into
a million pieces,

A  million pieces
that grew  tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..

A broken record
that
can't
be put
back
together
to
save
what they once had,
no matter
how hard
they tried

Only pictures
and the words
to their song
prevailed...

To live on
through
the destroyed
pieces

Reviews

[gothicchica]

i can sooooooooooooo relae to that but the guy was my best friend so it suced when we werent friends anymore and the girl he flirted with thinx its her fualt we broke up

[Searching 4 Serenity]

There isn't much to say except for the words that are already there.

[Audrey Howitt]

Nice job as always!
This is my favorite part:

A million pieces
that grew tired
of trying
to rekindle
something
that was
not
there
anymore,
now only a
fond memory..

[Sam Severn]

I truly LOVE the way this is written, the way it's crafted, n' the way it's laid out on the page makes the fractured sentiments ring even TRUER! GREAT, GREAT STUFF!! ♥

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Wonderful poem I just love it. Sad but awesome! Thanks for sharing.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

thats really good

[Elijah Gleaves]

great metaphor and the way you spaced the lines resembled a broken record, good work

[Aidz]

Wel done young lady a very kewl write indeed, great how you used the broken record

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a wonderful way to describe a broken love. the million pieces are vivid and strong. The last stanza sums up this poem nicely.

[LeaflessTree]

And so the song never played once more ;)