Life's Like School

Life's Like School

A Poem by Tasha
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Comparing two completely different things.

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Life's like school,
there are people
to help you,
and people to
hurt you..

Life's like school
because
there are clubs
to support you,
in your time of need,
and jealous
people
that  leave you
high and dry

Life's like school
because its
crazy
and unpredictable...
you just have to
go along with
the rules...

The rules of life..

There's no pamphlet
of life,
to tell you how
to live,
only crowded
hallways...

In this mixed up
word
we
call
our
lives...

© 2011 Tasha


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A very true poem. Life is life, and life is like school. I reallly like this. The comparison is very supportive, and you can clearly tell the frustrating times in our lives. Life is quite cruel sometimes, but stand on the other side of the spectrum, everything could look different. It is yet simple, frank and true. I also love the way how you use school with life to bring out the entire key point of the topic. An magnificent piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Life's like school
because its
crazy
and unpredictable...
you just have to
go along with
the rules...

nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever and true, all through the school of life we are forever learning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever comparison, yet oh so true! I love it! All of these are true, me being a teenager I know what school's like AND what life's like.
This rings so very true. Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very true poem. Life is life, and life is like school. I reallly like this. The comparison is very supportive, and you can clearly tell the frustrating times in our lives. Life is quite cruel sometimes, but stand on the other side of the spectrum, everything could look different. It is yet simple, frank and true. I also love the way how you use school with life to bring out the entire key point of the topic. An magnificent piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The comparison is brought out really well with this poem. Its simple, frank and very true. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. The comparison is very apt. And the frustrations in life, very similar to those in school at times. Nice work :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title alone said it all. For some, life IS like school. Others look at life as a game. And a few of us think of it as a test.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All very true, fantastic work =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice comparison i like this it really is the pure truth

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aint that the truth!? I love this poem very true about life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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