A very true poem. Life is life, and life is like school. I reallly like this. The comparison is very supportive, and you can clearly tell the frustrating times in our lives. Life is quite cruel sometimes, but stand on the other side of the spectrum, everything could look different. It is yet simple, frank and true. I also love the way how you use school with life to bring out the entire key point of the topic. An magnificent piece.
Clever comparison, yet oh so true! I love it! All of these are true, me being a teenager I know what school's like AND what life's like.
This rings so very true. Good job
A very true poem. Life is life, and life is like school. I reallly like this. The comparison is very supportive, and you can clearly tell the frustrating times in our lives. Life is quite cruel sometimes, but stand on the other side of the spectrum, everything could look different. It is yet simple, frank and true. I also love the way how you use school with life to bring out the entire key point of the topic. An magnificent piece.
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