Am I Blind ?

Am I Blind ?

A Poem by Tasha

Am I blind to not see
what is in front of me?
is it because I choose
not to see?

Am I blind for not
realizing that
I'm not the
only one...

I'm not the only one
that  fell in your trap,
to be caught in
your web of lies...

Am I blind to see
that you hurt
so many
other people,
I'm just a new addition
to the list,
a list no one
would ever want
to be on

Was I that blind
to let my emotions
get the best of me

I thought things were fine
then it suddenly hit me
that they weren't...

I was just to blind to realize it...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I don't know what the problem is, but it seems like everyone's having relationship problems. This is for another friend. I hope I can give her some good advice.

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I guess we all have relationship problems now and then.
I am sorry you have a friend going through this.
But that is what relationships are all about.
No relationship is perfect, we all go through hard times.
That is what makes a relationship stronger.
Sometimes we need to sit and be alone and think things through,
Sometimes you need to talk to through. Which ever is the easiest.
Love takes two...commucation is the key.
It may hurt and bring tears but the thing is you pull through together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.



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I have had my share of relationship problems, and if there is one thing that I have learned over the years: its that, for the most part, we talk to much, and need to learn to listen more! Not just with our ears but also with our heart!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am sorry to hear your friend are having relationship problems :(
It is not easy and can be heart breaking.
Believe that no matter what trial we do through in life there must be a reason for it even of we can quite see it.
I know that my best relationships have had problems
but i also know its possible to pull through it.
the best of luck to her and you for giving advice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think everyone everwhere always has relationship problems ^_^ This is actually quite good. I can tell that you worked on the choppiness of the poems! It's quite good indeed, and kind of inspiring.

To me, this tells us that we are not alone, and that other people feel just like we do.

There was a couple grammar mistakes, really small though. Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We remain blind to what is in front of us and deny the truth because we cannot admit a fault with someone because of the hurt it will cause.
But sometimes you need to open your eyes and accept that the hurt is inevitable and less painful than the hurt that will happen if things are left the way they are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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TJ
This was amazing! I think it had a great flow and the words you chose were perfect!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all meet the wrong people, make the right mistakes or the right people, and make the wrong mistakes. But what won’t kill us, will only make us stronger. Very well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes in life we are blind to things we don't want to see. We see them you just decide to ignore them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is definitely a feeling and questioning that all of us experience at one time or another.. good thought on it..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We only see what we want to see, afraid the heart will be hurt by the head.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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