A Tree Within

I had no inspiration for this.

A tree grew inside my head,
a tree grew in
its roots are veins,
its branches nerves,
its love stimulates
the colors of the leaves
in its different seasons,
thoughts is tangled foliage
your glance sets me on fire,
and its fruits of shade
are bloody red apples
and pomegranates that
spark a flame

Day breaks

in the body's night
there within, inside my head,
the tree speaks...

Come closer, so you can here what she has to say

Reviews

[♥Lugar Para Siem..]

Wow This is so deep I dont know where to begin.... Trees normally symbolize knowlege and life in General. The Tree of the knowledge of good and evil, and the Tree of life. Apples and Pommegrantes are fruits of love, Apples the knowlege of love, and the pommegrante the Passion of love. The Tangled foliage mentioned in the poem, Could symbolize the waring that each side of our inner psyche does, one battleing for dominance over the other. Then the night, The stillness as the most inner thoughts are made loud in the mind, and the one so longing to express them. This poem is so remarkable and its imagry is superb. Great job!

[Bailey C. Writing]

thoughts is tangled foliage
*thoughts are tangled foliage
:) Is sounded a bit off.

This was so gorgeous -adds it to my favorites- You girl, have a gift.
The imagery, the sensory, it was all just so beautiful! Great job!

[panheadpigments]

Very good.

[light and ashes]

I love this. Great piece.

[PetiteGemini]

This poem is so beautiful and I love how you put images into it. It really spoke to me.

[Miss Fox]

Beautiful imagery and comparison. This is the type of writing that can inspire creativity within others. Well done.

[Brad]

spoken with the whisper of wind

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Very nicely written and stated.
I like this write.

[Helpless]

nicely done!

[Kiari Sabon]

its a very nice poem