I'll Hold Your Hand

This is for the Simple Words group and contest

I'll hold your hand,
when no one else is around,
I'll be there for you
when your world crashes down

I'll hold your hand
when  everything fails,
and I'll stick by you
until the end

I'll hold your hand
until all the darkness
and shadows of the past
pass over us

I'll hold your hand
just to feel
closer to you
when I have no one else to hold...

Author's Note

We had to use the word "Shadow" in our piece.

Reviews

[torments_scribe]

pretty...it almost sounds like it could be the beginnings of a good love song.

[Bailey C. Writing]

Aw, this was sweet

[loverly9316]

i like it. the flow is a little off but i like it.

[Cherrie Palmer]

this has the feeling of a lost love you just cannt shake

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Sweet and loving...seems like it should be a ballad to play during a wedding dance.

[Kelly M.]

Aw! I loved this! :) Great read!!

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Very nicely done Ta'Shandra.
Enjoyable read.