I'll Hold Your Hand

This is for the Simple Words group and contest

I'll hold your hand,
when no one else is around,
I'll be there for you
when your world crashes down

I'll hold your hand
when  everything fails,
and I'll stick by you
until the end

I'll hold your hand
until all the darkness
and shadows of the past
pass over us

I'll hold your hand
just to feel
closer to you
when I have no one else to hold...

Author's Note

We had to use the word "Shadow" in our piece.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and kind poem. Holding a hand of a spouse, child or parent allow us to feel connected. Sometime human contact can save a life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Chris]

"And the shadows of the past pass over us." My favorite line. I'm not sure if you intended to, but it seems like you took a lyrical approach.
Either way, well done.

[ErinLovesYou<3]

I really like this one, great job on expressing your emotions. (:

[Andrew - Moon Fixer]

Very nice. when all else fails, hold your hand. I really liked this.
Thank you
Moon Fixer

[TheMizFit]

Kind of reminds me of the song, "Hold On" and "Save You"
Anyways, this is honestly a beautiful poem. Thumbs up! :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Simple promises...always work the best.

[Brad]

i am amazed at your use of challenges, this one is one of my favorites from you

[Allie :)]

If that was for a contest, I think that you made your piece stand out because you didn't make your piece about the actual shadows, you turned it around and made it a small detail

[Enigma]

Simplicity worked yet again. Great write! :)