It Takes Two

It Takes Two

A Poem by Tasha

If it takes two to tango,
tell me how you can dance
by yourself,
I'm leaving you on the dance-floor
mainly because you have two left feet

If it takes two to make you happy,
then I'll be here for you,
but if you want to make fun of my weight
then I'm leaving,
and never looking back again

If it takes two to make me smile,
and to actually laugh again
then I did the right thing
by leaving you and your horrible rhythm...

Because right now...
it only takes me!

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I have no real inspiration for this, I just thought about it and wrote it. I hope you guys like it.

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This poem was very interesting. I wasn't sure about it after the first read, but on the second, I found the rhythem, and after the third time, I was really felt what you were saying.
I really liked the beginning; comparing a dying relationship with a bad dance partner, and your ending was dynamic.
Write on! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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A lovely inspirational poem ! The only line I'm not entirely sure about is "but if you want to make fun of my weight then I'm leaving" it just took me aback when I was reading; it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem which uses metaphor delicately and effectively
But just my thoughts, feel free to ignore.
A very good write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I thought this was cute, good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It sure does, leave em break dancing, lol, thank you much appreciated, WS

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL! Nice! A pretty good and interesting poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i thought this was so cute and funny, i loved it and it was a great write if you thought of it off the bat like that. (=

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I certainly do. I can see rite into your heart and its messy in there! This piece however is crisp and clean with a well placed undertone that says to me; Holy s**t, what a mess. Very good write, Thank You for posting it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So cute! :) I do like this. And I also agree. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

curious expression of what i image are personal feelings.. good composition here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem was very interesting. I wasn't sure about it after the first read, but on the second, I found the rhythem, and after the third time, I was really felt what you were saying.
I really liked the beginning; comparing a dying relationship with a bad dance partner, and your ending was dynamic.
Write on! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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