Fighting For The Championship

Fighting For The Championship

A Poem by Tasha
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For Creative Poetry Group. Had to use the words: affection, flame, soothe, clinch, coliseum, and bounty.

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The competition is getting intense
with only four couples left..
its anybody's game...

We must treat each dance
like it's our last...
let our affection for one another
take its course,
while we soothe  the audience with our Waltz,
and let a simple spark..
turn into a flame
in our Salsa,

While trying to clinch our spot
into the season finale,
to get the bounty... that mirrored ball

Performing in the coliseum
was nerve wrecking at first,
but now its like an everyday thing..
I bask in the audiences cheers

Four more couples left...
and I am...
" The Silent Assassin  "

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This was for the Creative Poetry Group, and our words this week were: affection, flame, soothe, clinch, coliseum, and bounty.
I wrote this about Dancing With The Stars because that is the best show ever!
I love everybody, but Hines Ward and Kim Johnson have something special and I think they will win... after all he is " The Silent Assassin "
There picture is dancing in Guilty Pleasures week to "End of the Road" by Boys 2 Men. Enjoy.

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I try to avoid watching shows like this out of masculine pride and British stoicism one might say.
However, I have been 'forced' to watch in the past by certain lady friends.
You little Fandango captures the essence of the experience, I would say for all participating, until at the end you express it is a certain person/couple and their point of view.
All in all a good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Imaginative work at its best..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed reading this very creative piece. This is one of my favorite shows and I think you did a wonderful job in writing about it. Very nicely penned.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great stuff. I really liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is filled with creativity and I love how you made this a dance competition. I can picture the couples twirling around on the dance floor in hope of being the winning couple.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it. You perfectly describe the heat of the competition and thats amazing. well done.
:D I love dancing and I lurrrrrrrrrrve the show, though i dont wathc it much cos my parents dont beleve in real live tv, (forgot what its reallu called), but i love it anyway, cos its about dance and that gets to me, and makes me love it. I also enjoy studying their moves and style and technique cos i learn a lot from it.

well done. this is an amzoing read

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and good slice, love the reading...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem. I feel sorry for the people on the dance shows. Waiting to find out if they are going forward or going home. Competition is difficult in anything we do. I like the way you ended the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting topic

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

good write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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