Lost At Sea

Ariel and Nemos thoughts for once being lost and now found.

The oceans full of new opportunities,
and I'm ready to take the plunge
to become lost at sea,
or lost in love
searching for my prince charming,

While meeting interesting creatures along the way...
like Sebastian the Lobster,
Dory and Flounder... two very different fish,
and the Turtles that are like dude,
not caring about the world
or the keys that help me find my way

Being under the sea
can be great
it means getting away from my controlling father,
I know he means well
but I want to find things out on my own
I want to go through the trials and tribulations,
I want to go through heartache after heartache

I really don't understand why,
but I want to so I can
learn from my mistakes,

Then I'll make it home again...
safe and sound
so you can welcome me with open arms
because your baby is now found

And taken out of the sea of endless possibilities
an put into a tank of love, hope,
and much need satisfaction  and gratitude...

Author's Note

I combined Ariel from The Little Mermaid and Nemo from Finding Nemo and this is what I got. I hope you like it.

It wouldn't let me put Nemo's picture with the words. Can someone help... thanks. :)

Reviews

I like the idea. As short poems on their own they each work. As a collective I had a hard time keeping it straight. maybe it was the jumping between character thoughts. They almost go together but seem to be just a little off at times. While this is good I would suggest reorder for a better flow of thought.

[Kevin Horsley]

Hi Ta'shandra, I like the merging of both Nemo and Arial. The premise works really well.
I would say that this is the best of all of the disneyesque poems you have submitted thus far. Keep it up :-)

[Krystal Nicole]

Do you like have an obsession for animated Disney movies? Lol . I have an obsession with Beauty and the Beast and The Little Mermaid so I LOVED it!! Great job and keep the poems coming. You're an AMAZING POET!!!

[compositionc]

This is a very interesting poem. I loved it.

[Henry Clemmons]

Don't know if I can help you find Nemo, but great poem. Loved it.

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very interesting read, i enjoyed this.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very interesting topic and concept; quite unique and well written

[quinfinn]

this is, to date, the very best i have seen you write and i applaud you for making a known subject so interesting and unique. what a wonderful, expressive poem this is.
great job!

[vincentbals]

Great poem. It perfectly reflects the movie. Thanks for sharing this!

[CharlesMonroe]

"it means getting away from my controlling father,
I know he means well
but I want to find things out on my own
I want to go through the trials and tribulations,
I want to go through heartache after heartache"
this means so much to me...cause I feel that exact way.
I love this poem though, it's beautiful (:
100/100