Pia Pan

i tried to blend Peter Pan and Tinkerbell

Happy endings are only a few steps away,
a few steps from  me flying to the one I love...
Pia Pan,
to everyone else she's "different" and "strange"
but to me she's just comfortable in her own skin
she doesn't need make up,
or fad diets,
she loves all her curves...
and of course I do to.....

♥♥♥♥

He's so amazing...
the way he takes care of me when I'm down
a lot of people think he's a "push over"
but to me he cares about everything and everyone
plus he makes me happy

♥♥♥♥

We are made for each other Pia,
I'm like a jet
ready for takeoff
and to land in your heart

♥♥♥♥

Author's Note

i tried to do both Peter Pan's and Tinker-bells perspective at once. did it work? i would be grateful for your thoughts.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

To me, blending Peter Pan and Tinkerbell's aspect worked very well, in this very nice creative penning, which I so enjoyed reading. It is very well balanced and is a lovely soft, gentle, loving write, so well expressed, with a satin smooth flow. Lovely detail in the poem also, which makes it very appealing. Thank you very much for sharing. Blessings always.......

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24

[ब्र&#..]

great job!
Alltid
-Meja

[LA Lorena]

A most creative write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. The concept of personal emotion between Peter Pan and Tinker-bell I believe never been tried to be expressed in words. It is very good. You have alive and active mind. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[GlamGirl]

A very interesting perspective! I agree, the last stanza is very cute! Good job!

[Krystal Nicole]

I loved the way yoi did both pov, amd I think it worked out. Great job!!

[Aidz]

like the last stanza, and it worked well

[Fenner]

Very sweet, love these poems you're doing, they're very creative and smart. Plus it brings back loads of memories :) Wonder what you're going to do next! Combining the seven dwarfs with Alice in wonderland??? Who knows, but I'm sure it'll be great.