Pia Pan

i tried to blend Peter Pan and Tinkerbell

Happy endings are only a few steps away,
a few steps from  me flying to the one I love...
Pia Pan,
to everyone else she's "different" and "strange"
but to me she's just comfortable in her own skin
she doesn't need make up,
or fad diets,
she loves all her curves...
and of course I do to.....

♥♥♥♥

He's so amazing...
the way he takes care of me when I'm down
a lot of people think he's a "push over"
but to me he cares about everything and everyone
plus he makes me happy

♥♥♥♥

We are made for each other Pia,
I'm like a jet
ready for takeoff
and to land in your heart

♥♥♥♥

Author's Note

i tried to do both Peter Pan's and Tinker-bells perspective at once. did it work? i would be grateful for your thoughts.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

To me, blending Peter Pan and Tinkerbell's aspect worked very well, in this very nice creative penning, which I so enjoyed reading. It is very well balanced and is a lovely soft, gentle, loving write, so well expressed, with a satin smooth flow. Lovely detail in the poem also, which makes it very appealing. Thank you very much for sharing. Blessings always.......

[Cody McGeary]

Great idea for a poem. I like how you use the Children's story characters as characters in your poems. I think everybody watched Disney movies growing up so we can relate to them. Very nice.

[Sweets]

This is so lovely and sweeeeet! :)
I love both characters!
It's so romantic and reminds me of childhood!
Great work! =)
(adding it to my favs)

[Yina]

I love the way you did this!:) So cute! Especially since I think Tink is totally adorable:)

[CagedBIRDsings]

A creative poem! I would have never thought of blending them together and it turned out to be very good! Well done!

[alexlessah]

yes i think blending the two worked very well. great job!

[Aurora Lynn]

Wait...I'm a little bit confused...Pia Pan is a girl version of Peter Pan, and the other voice in this poem is a guy version of Tinkerbell, right? That part was a little bit confusing, at least to me... but other than that, I really liked the piece. Good job!
~Aurora

[Lucy]

I think you handled the separate voices very skilfully. The transitions weren't rough or choppy at all! Great work, as usual!


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[Ravyne Hawke]

I think you did an amazing job blending the two perspectives together. I love the Pia Pan instead of Peter. Lovely use of imagery in this piece and it flows like silk off my tongue. Very well-crafted and an excellent poem!

[Kathryn]

Lovely work, it's great :)

[brenda]

really good !!!!! i love it !!! great write:)