Pia Pan

i tried to blend Peter Pan and Tinkerbell

Happy endings are only a few steps away,
a few steps from  me flying to the one I love...
Pia Pan,
to everyone else she's "different" and "strange"
but to me she's just comfortable in her own skin
she doesn't need make up,
or fad diets,
she loves all her curves...
and of course I do to.....

♥♥♥♥

He's so amazing...
the way he takes care of me when I'm down
a lot of people think he's a "push over"
but to me he cares about everything and everyone
plus he makes me happy

♥♥♥♥

We are made for each other Pia,
I'm like a jet
ready for takeoff
and to land in your heart

♥♥♥♥

Author's Note

i tried to do both Peter Pan's and Tinker-bells perspective at once. did it work? i would be grateful for your thoughts.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

To me, blending Peter Pan and Tinkerbell's aspect worked very well, in this very nice creative penning, which I so enjoyed reading. It is very well balanced and is a lovely soft, gentle, loving write, so well expressed, with a satin smooth flow. Lovely detail in the poem also, which makes it very appealing. Thank you very much for sharing. Blessings always.......

[Melissa]

I love this part :
to everyone else she's "different" and "strange"
but to me she's just comfortable in her own skin
she doesn't need make up,
or fad diets,
she loves all her curves...
This part is very powerful..I love it!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it worked and it is so cute!

[quinfinn]

i love the last lines "i'm like a jet ready for take off and to land in your heart"
this is a delightful play on words and fits the theme wonderfully. terrific write.

[Pebbles]

ahh i can almost hear tinkers bells here , so sweet x

[Searching 4 Serenity]

It was a sweet write

[Kelly]

I love your fairy tale pieces! It's so fun reading different takes on the originals. I might try it myself... Great job!

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

This turned out really good.. awesome write!

[light and ashes]

This is sweet.
My favorite lines are the last four.
"We are made for each other Pia, I am like a jet ready for takeoff and to land in your heart."
Nice work

[InnerSpirit]

Like a piece of candy melting in your mouth...

This poem has an abundance of sweetness! Amazing what we can put together when we mosh things, huh? Like choclate and p-nut butter.

Enjoyed it!