Pia Pan

i tried to blend Peter Pan and Tinkerbell

Happy endings are only a few steps away,
a few steps from  me flying to the one I love...
Pia Pan,
to everyone else she's "different" and "strange"
but to me she's just comfortable in her own skin
she doesn't need make up,
or fad diets,
she loves all her curves...
and of course I do to.....

♥♥♥♥

He's so amazing...
the way he takes care of me when I'm down
a lot of people think he's a "push over"
but to me he cares about everything and everyone
plus he makes me happy

♥♥♥♥

We are made for each other Pia,
I'm like a jet
ready for takeoff
and to land in your heart

♥♥♥♥

Author's Note

i tried to do both Peter Pan's and Tinker-bells perspective at once. did it work? i would be grateful for your thoughts.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

To me, blending Peter Pan and Tinkerbell's aspect worked very well, in this very nice creative penning, which I so enjoyed reading. It is very well balanced and is a lovely soft, gentle, loving write, so well expressed, with a satin smooth flow. Lovely detail in the poem also, which makes it very appealing. Thank you very much for sharing. Blessings always.......

[J. Marc]

It is well done and gives a sense of romanticism too! Keep on writing and developing your skills!

[Tasha]

Thank you J, I will.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad. Decent work for sure.

[Miss Fox]

how darling :)

[dreaming dame]

Perfect! :) I love it! :)

[Brittni]

Your talent shines more and more with each thing I read! It's SO nice to read uplifting and sweet pieces for a change(not that I dislike the emotional pieces) But your writing definately stands out!

[LoopyLoo]

Woo :-)

[Jibin]

nice writing as always. you got the all stuffs to glue me in to your works.
:)

[Lourisa]

A really creative idea. Cute and i enjoyed reading it.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I think this worked out quite well. Cute, and fun. I loved the last lines. Great write.

[L. Catherine]

This was very sweet and the way you combined their perspectives was clever. :)