Lost Email

We use to talk everyday,
whatever happened to that?
its like our love for each other
got lost in an email
its like I'm trapped in the spam filter
because we never spend time together
I hate being lost,
and the thought of losing you is terrifying
its like never entering your in-box
and I'm left waiting to be opened
waiting for our love to come back
because its missing...
in the world of emails

Author's Note

Let me know you guys think.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

I like this very nicely crafted poem very much Ta'shandra. Feelings well penned by your poetic pen so artistically. Lovely use of metaphor to describe a love which is ending - all the different phases of love gone through and excellently described in your poem. Nice silk smooth flow to the poem, which is so well expressed. Thank you for sharing Ta'shandra. Blessings always......

[Krystal Nicole]

I love the flow and the message behind it. Great read!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I know this feeling. This happens sometimes with friendships and romance that is flying in the arms of this electronic world we now live in. Those emails brighten the holes in our souls and when they are not there we feel empty. Well done.