Lost Email

We use to talk everyday,
whatever happened to that?
its like our love for each other
got lost in an email
its like I'm trapped in the spam filter
because we never spend time together
I hate being lost,
and the thought of losing you is terrifying
its like never entering your in-box
and I'm left waiting to be opened
waiting for our love to come back
because its missing...
in the world of emails

Author's Note

Let me know you guys think.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

I like this very nicely crafted poem very much Ta'shandra. Feelings well penned by your poetic pen so artistically. Lovely use of metaphor to describe a love which is ending - all the different phases of love gone through and excellently described in your poem. Nice silk smooth flow to the poem, which is so well expressed. Thank you for sharing Ta'shandra. Blessings always......

[Allie :)]

I have a huge soft spot for poems built around a metaphor/smilie!
Your works are improving greatly.
You're incorporating new interests into your pieces, though most times it's subtle.
The pieces in which you stray out of your comfort zones are the pieces in which you stand out the most!

[stars are far]

wow ... really nice interesting ..attracting :)

[Yina]

I know the feeling. This is EXACTLY how I feel about my relationship with my use-to-be best friend:(

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good poem. I'd be scared to lose love too if he stopped answering me too. I love the emotion within this poem. It really speaks wonders. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Bertie]

Great metaphor with a clear concept and direct emotions
Well done :)

[Cody McGeary]

This is very good. I have never thought of love and emails being similar but now I do. Good job.

[CharlesMonroe]

This is really pretty, great job (:

[Kathryn]

I love it. It sort of reminds me of the concept of e-dating, and of breaking up/asking out overthe interwebz for some reason. Lovely work :)

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

Awesome (:

[GlamGirl]

An email is a nice way to describe a relationship. All the different folders it goes in, until it gets dumped into the delete folder. Great write!