Lost Email

We use to talk everyday,
whatever happened to that?
its like our love for each other
got lost in an email
its like I'm trapped in the spam filter
because we never spend time together
I hate being lost,
and the thought of losing you is terrifying
its like never entering your in-box
and I'm left waiting to be opened
waiting for our love to come back
because its missing...
in the world of emails

Author's Note

Let me know you guys think.

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

I like this very nicely crafted poem very much Ta'shandra. Feelings well penned by your poetic pen so artistically. Lovely use of metaphor to describe a love which is ending - all the different phases of love gone through and excellently described in your poem. Nice silk smooth flow to the poem, which is so well expressed. Thank you for sharing Ta'shandra. Blessings always......

[A.E. Surdam]

Mesmirizing. Like so many relationships, you have captured the essence of it and weaved this idea into an expressive poem. Excellent work.

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wonderful little gem. i feel like there is an emotional presence in this.

[Canicus]

I like how can relate everything to everyday things

[Sukriti Suki]

Interesting..Nice.

[KAREN]

This is really a well written write. You captured the pain of longing to be with the one you love, but never seem to get in touch with him.

[Lucy Lou :)]

I like this a lot it's really cool, modern but sad :) 100/100!

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

Aww :( its a sad poem but i really like it. It was a great read. :)
Good job!
100/100

[Felicity Winter]

This is very creative. I like this.

[augustmoon80]

I can relate to this poem. I hate how relationships can go south so fast and are are left wondering if your email is even being read, by someone you want to get a message to so badly, especially if you are trying to say you are sorry.

[Lela]

I really like the simplicity of this piece. And, of course, the symbolism. It is very nice and it is very true. Keep it up!