Prove To Me

old poem

Prove to me you're sorry, for all the things you've done
prove to me you won't lie this time
prove to me you're faithful
prove to me you love me
prove to me you won't let me go
prove to me that's what's in the past is in the past, and we have to learn to let go
prove to me you'll be my knight in shining armor
prove to me you've changed
prove to me I'm not making another mistake....

Author's Note

there's a part 2

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

We all want things to work out with the people that we love and care about the most! Thanks for posting this!

[Calypso]

You were able to tell a wonderful story here.

[Shawn Pfister]

Okay, all the lines above it tell me the narrator is making another mistake.

Good repetition, strong poem. Really shows the belief some women have that a man will change and things will be different. Sad, but true

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the repetition in this one.. it makes it a much more powerful poem

[dreaming dame]

I want part two! Almost scared of what'll hapen if the
trust is put in, and broken heartlessly. I really like it.

[Kathryn]

Well, part 1 s beautiful :) Ilove your poetry (as I'm sure I've mentioned) and through its simple repitition and ctunning structure it is a really powerful peice. well done :)

[quinfinn]

still absorbing part one, my dear. very well spoken . simple format , yet filled with fire and angst. well done!

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This is so wonderful like this write.

[brenda]

aaw:) this is so cute so deep i love the poem:)

[compositionc]

It's a good read.